I love ...um, what's her name! All I need is the name my wonderful and god-like beta wants in the credits, and I can post the story (and you all can finally stop hearing about it!). This second beta was exactly what I wanted: She totally picked my story apart, suggesting things to tighten the wording, and fixed a tense issue I had (past perfect! Pah! :P ). But most importantly, she fixed a character/theme issue. I had You-Know-Who calling Peter by his first name! Gah! I totally didn't even think about how wrong that was!
Typing with a cat using your wrist as a pillow is a challenge. It can't be too nice for her, either.
Eh, work foo better be continued in a friends-only post.